“Even Exquisite Beauty Cannot Hide The Demon Within”


My First Novel

Even exquisite beauty cannot  hide the demon within!

Imagine you are thrust in to a world of malevolent spirits, a world of demons, the world of the Fallen Angels? Envision a being of deceiving beauty seeking to devour your soul and destroy your life, the life of your lover, your family, your people? Its lust for power reaching further still causing the rivers of humanity to run red. Its need for vengeance driving it to destroy the sons of Adam that usurped its place within Gods heart. What if this tormented spirit chose you to possess? What if it chose your daughter?

What if?


“Continue with life,” Asmodeus said. “Work hard to make our city prosper,” it instructed. “We will find a new, better way of life,” the demon encouraged as it boarded up the doors of our church. “We will become strong and powerful!” Asmodeus declared as it sent our women and girls to the fields, and drilled our men and boys in merciless and gruesome training hour after dangerous hour.

How could we continue with life, our beguiled hearts and souls sacrificed upon the altar of all our hopes? How could we work to better our city when it lay in the covetous hands of a hellish creature? How could we find a new and better way with our freedom to worship our Great Father ripped away and our children cursed by the quintessence of evil?

8 Responses to ““Even Exquisite Beauty Cannot Hide The Demon Within””

  1. very interesting. so im just curious did that dude rape her or did she kick his butt cus thats what i wouldve done. i would of took him out and dragged his demon but to hell. just sayin. what is the chick speaking’s name?

  2. ok i am intrigued lol….hmm sounds wicked. but in a good way

  3. What is the exquisite beauty exactly? You left me hanging.

  4. Christina S Says:

    Love it… Waiting anxiously 2 b able 2 purchase a copy

  5. I was completely brought in to the story and wishing I could go buy it to finish it. I have so much time on my hands now that I am staying home and I am always looking for a good novel the will excite me and give me little morsels of wisdom along the way. This book is a work of art and you are a true teacher. Thank you!

  6. It won’t be long and I will have the joy of letting you all read the finished work!

  7. Looking forward to reading more!!

  8. Thanks for the marvelous posting! I actually enjoyed reading it, you may be a great author.I will remember to bookmark your blog and will eventually come back very soon. I want to encourage one to continue your great writing, have a nice holiday weekend!

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